Cinematography video feedback and learner response

C+
WWW:

• Good location.
• Effective establishing shot-use of pan.
• Correctly labelled shots- good use of titles.
• Very effective tracking.
• Use of music- appropriate.

EBI:

• Sound quietly-avoid noise of wind.
• Lacks continuity of narrative.
• Blurred camera.

For future references i can carry on using appropriate music as this would make my videos more appealing for the audience. This would make the audience want to watch more. Next time when making my videos i need to avoid outside noises that don't make the scene continuous. I need to have a narrative in my video with a plot.