Sound video feedback and learner response

WWW:

• Parallel & Contrapuntal sound.
• Non-diegetic sound.
• Excellent.
• Good variety of contrapuntal and parallel sound.
• The parallel & contrapuntal sound was easily identifiable.
• Used both parallel and diegetic sound
• Good quality blog work
• Detailed analysis

EBI:

• Make all sound levels the same throughout all the clips.
• Less abrupt ending (audio down).
• Better transition between the scenes.
• Fade the music next time.
• Include diegetic sound.

For future references i need to fade out the music between the different scenes. This would be a more smooth video. I need to have better transition between different scenes. This would allow the audience to recognise the different scenes easier. Make the sound less abrupt during the scenes. Make the sound level the same in all the videos.