Mise-en-scene makeover: Learner Response

WWW:

• 'Good editing'
• 'I like the different transitions in the end when presenting the final price' 
• 'Good use of music and the transition was really good'
• 'Nice shot'
• 'Good use of natural lighting at the end'
• 'Clear transition'
• 'Nice editing', 'good music- goes with the speed'
• 'Really interesting for audience to watch'
• 'Good music choice'
• 'Appropriate graphics. E.g. colour of font', 'appropriate music e.g. parallel sound', 'moving camera at the end e.g. finished product', ';well positioned camera', 'well lit' 

EBI:

• 'Make it more fun'
• 'Too fast'
• 'Music needs to change'
• 'More text'
• 'Mute the ending'
• 'More transitions & effects'
• 'Edit extra bits out e.g. on the phone'
• 'More editing effects needed'
• 'Too short'
• 'Speed it up a little bit more'
• ' End product seemed to drag on for too long'
• 'Too long of the finished product', 'embed video on blog', 'no page curl'

Self Assessment:

• WWW: I think the makeup was well done. The angle of the shot was really good. Seeing the final result was a good idea. the music was parallel to the video.The pace was a good pace.
• EBI: Use a bit more effects and mute the sound at the ending when seeing the final result of the makeup.

I think for my future work I could maybe improve on the feedbacks I got back from the class. I could try to experiment with my effects. Try to a different pace for the speed. Try a more unique music. Try out different camera angles.

Mise-en-scene to character is very important as this will give an overall judgment of how the character's personality is and what their role could be in the film or television. The mise-en-scene gives hints of what the narrative is and how the story is going to develop and end. The mise-en-scene makes the audience think about the narrative.