Coursework: Preliminary exercise feedback and LR

The preliminary exercise is a brilliant opportunity to learn or refresh the basics of filmmaking before creating your actual coursework project.

After the screening of the preliminary exercises in class, you need to create a blogpost called 'Preliminary exercise learner response' and embed the video from YouTube. Then, complete the following tasks as your feedback and learner response:


1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class.

WWW- 

  • POV Shots+camera movement
  • Well framed cinematography
  • Soem jump cuts
  • Sound design-echoes
EBI-
  • More jump cuts
  • More ambitious locations
  • Follow brief/instructions
  • Sound of dialogue-phone



2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your TV drama scene.

WWW- 

  • very good use of shots close-ups were very effective
  • camera movement
  • Echoing of the creeper

EBI-

  • More locations
  • Fade sound a little bit more
  • More ambitious characters

3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise statement of intent?

I think i completed the objective very well as i met what the brief was asking for i could have made a few more adjustments in the mini preliminary to make it a more higher level work.
4) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project?

I think what i have learned is to have a certain date and time and who your going to include in the scenes to be laid out properly as with out this there would be nothing to film as this will be a lack of organisation of who the cast is going to be.
5) Now you have completed the preliminary exercise, will you change anything in your actual TV drama trailer? This could include narrative, character and script or technical elements such as mise-en-scene, camerawork and sound.

I think i will change my cast the person that played the role Meri and i will change up a little bit more of more camera work and shots that i may film at the beginning. I will also change up their costume as well.

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